What do you think of my huckleberry finn essay?

So, honestly, I didn't read all of it. Sorry. What you need to do is make sure you have a thesis statement in your first (intro) paragraph. The Thesis should tell your definite topic and outline the next three paraghraphs. Your last sentance also shouldn't be such a short, clipped sentance. Craft it so that you make your reader think about whatever your topic is....which reminds me. I read some of it and definantly can't figure out your topic, so make sure that gets into your intro paragraph. good luck.